[Incomplete] Captain Davian Thule**

SUGGESTIONS: Hero Abilities: Raw Suggestion

Okay so I went over this with Glycine and Grasshoppa and they told me to put what suggestions for the spells I had here.

Okay, so I only have suggestions for skills three and the ult.

Skill Three: Okay, instead of the current skill for number three, I think it should be this:
BATTLE INSPIRATION:
Fluff: The sight of a dreadnought killing the Emperor's foes is inspiring to all of those who see it.
Per Unit Killed: A portion of the Dreadnought's attack is spread to neighbouring units. If they kill a unit, a portion of their attack is spread. (I'm not going to make up numbers, they would probably be way overpowered)
Passive

Ult:
VENERABLE UPGRADE:
Fluff: The Dreadnought becomes a Venerable Dreadnought, a machine held in awe by all of the Space Marines.
Upgrades: All of the Dreadnought's spells are upgraded, and the Dreadnought gains an additional x to strength and an additional x to his armor per level up.
Passive

i like the idea for these instead of wats there now lets just get some numbers on them then ill add them to the skill set

I ... suggest changing it from Thule to Bjorn the Fell-handed. Bjorn > Thule. Bjorn held The Fang with only a handful of Space Wolves against a massive Thousand Sons' fleet under the Daemon Prince Magnus' personal command. I mean ... come on. That's epic. And he's been around since the Horus Heresy, fought alongside Russ in battle. He knows a trick or two. xD