The Outsider

got board so

Innate – Harvest - every [20 18 16 14 12 10] kills he gains 1% of a random stat until death


sliver of hope – if the target fells below [2% 2.5% 3% 3.5% 4%] the target will die 3 secs after lasts for 15 secs as long as the target stays within a 700 aoe
cd- 30-45 sec
range- 200

Hellish presence - Passive aura- unalling a creep within 300 aoe with a [1.5% 3% 4.5% 6% 7.5%] chance and a [0.5% 1% 1.5% 2% 2.5%] of the creep killing itself
aoe- 300

Insanity – randomly placing clones of the outsider and the outsider in a 400 aoe around and target. Number of clones [2 4 6 8 10] for 6 secs clones do 50% damage but all damage done by the clones is then healed in 5 secs after the clones have disappeared

ult - illogical labyrinth – effect – cuases hero to be stuned the hero has a chance every sec to brake free based of int, [.3 .2 .1]*int*# of secs that have passed

i would suggest looking at this and combining your ideas

and also not posting in the development heroes forum
sorry XD

im gona move this to sand box

"The One who lives Beyond" and the outsider are the same C'tan

i know :p
thats why i said look at that post and talk to deus about combining ideas