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Post by Mortis on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:14 pm

"Once known as perhaps the greatest inquisitor of the times, Quixos slowly descended into true radicalism, summoning Daemonhosts and utilizing warp tainted artifacts to further his version of the Emperor's will. Despite all he has done, all the atrocities he has committed, he still sincerely believes he is doing the Emperor's work, and will kill any who stand before him, as he view them as defying the Will of the Emperor."

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Taint of Chaos (Passive) ( Only One trigger per Second)
"Once in combat with a Daemon, the tip of the Daemon's claw embedded in his heart. While too close to his heart to remove, he found that it slowly boosted his psyker abilities, and physical ones to an all time high."

The raw warp power flowing through the Inquistor passively grants him additional damage to all of his spells, Them doing an extra 5% of their damage Per Stack. In addition each stack of the ability grants him a temporary 1% Movement bonus, and a 5% Attack Speed bonus, Which stacks up to 20/25/30/35/40/45 Times. All stacks Fade in 10 Seconds, but refreshing on each spell cast. Quixos takes a damage per second per stack on him, stacks going on at a rate of 1/2/3/4/5/6 Per Cast.

Kharnagar, Demon Sword (Passive)
"The essence of a greater demon bound into a blade, Quixo's acquired the blade in a battle with a worshiper of Chaos. Rather then turning over the blade to the Inquisition to destroyed, he utilized it's power to destroy heretics, finding it's potency undeniable, even if technically against the teaching of the Inquisitions"

Kharnagar is incredibly potent in battle. Each scrap of life the sword takes, feeds the user, returning Mana equal to .2/.3/.4/.5 Mana per damage dealt. In addition, the sword has a 200 Ms Knockback For a total of one second, On a 10/15/20/25% chance

Speed of the Warp: ( Toggle)
"Channeling the warp energies pouring into him from the claw in his chest, Quixo's speed flares up allowing him to place blows with unholy speed and accuracy"

On each strike of his Daemon Sword, his speed allows him to strike multiple times in the time it would take a normal being to strike, but moving such is a constant drain on his powers. He strikes with such speed that each strike of the sword combusts, dealing 25/35/45/55% of his attack damage in an 100 Aoe centered on his target spread out evenly over all enemy units, draining 1%/1.5%/2%/2.5% of his current Maximum Mana per strike while active. Allso grants Truestrike, meaning his attacks never miss.

Daemonic Blast:
"The simple smite is a pysker power that many learn, but when fueled with raw warp energies, it can become something much more."

Deals 50/100/150/200 Damage in an 350 Aoe around Quixos, Pushing back 100 Ms and Slowing all hit by 10% for .5/1/1.5/2 Seconds (casting time .1 Second)
Cd: 16/14/12/10 Seconds
Manacost: 170/180/190/200

Ultimate:
Cadian Pylon
"Cadian Pylons are used on the Cadian Gate to pacify the warp... The results of one supercharged are terrifying to behold."
Mc: 250/350/450
Cd: 120/90/60 Seconds

Requiring the sacrifice of 30/40/50 % of his Max Hp, This spell summons a massive stormy gap in the fabric of the materium. Creates an immobile tear in the fabric of the Materium, in a 500 Aoe, Which deals damage equal to the .5*hp sacrificed per second to all non allied heros/units in it's radius. Lasts for 5/6/7 Seconds. In an area 750 beyond the radius of the main storm, all spells and items are Silenced.


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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Sun Apr 11, 2010 10:51 pm

wow, looks good. few things tho:

daemon sword is lame Razz possibly think of a way to spice it up a bit without resorting to +damage
the manasteal is good tho

speed is op beyond reason.
so, your saying that each attack deals its damage 2/3/4/5 more times?
so your giving him a 100% 3/4/5/6x critical on each attack.
no matter the manacost, thats insane.
tone that down alot

blast is good, numbers suck tho

ult: one question, how is the spell supposed to fire even if he dies, while still being channeling? Razz
he cant channel it while dead.

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:16 pm

I was thinking he is just imobile while it was going as he focuses on it. If he dies casting it or while channeling it, it moves around randomly, but if he is channeling it, he can control it.

Ok, so If a hero or creep dies after being hit by Kharnagar, why not have it give him a buff?

Im thinking either it takes stats... Ah, i got it. Each time he hits something and it dies, it explodes, dealing damage equal to his strength times 1/2/3/4

Does that work?
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Post by Grass Hopper on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:19 pm

for the sword?
might still be powerful in dense creep clusters.
possible put a cooldown or some sort of restriction so it doesnt pop every creep you kill

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:22 pm

Whats wrong with it poping each creep? Honestly? at tops it would do 100 damage in an aoe only on a creep kill, it eventually will kill everything, but not anywhere near quickly, its just like any other splash
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:36 pm

4*str will *quickly* excede 100 damage.
not to mention he already has an aoe nuke.

he could clear a creep wave about as fast as current zoey.

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Sun Apr 11, 2010 11:44 pm

Damn...

Well, What else could i do? I want to make something that is spectacular. What about a knockback on each swing?
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:27 am

knockback *chance*

which would work good as well.

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:34 am

Why not a 10/15/20/25 Percent chance for 1 second knockback?
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Post by Grass Hopper on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:35 am

sounds good, even if it is still a bit boring Razz

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Mon Apr 12, 2010 12:52 am

Well, The hits also give him mana, fueling more and more things... Which also gives him extra uses of his togle
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Glycine on Mon Apr 12, 2010 2:25 am

Is it just me, or is the ult deceptively weak? What's the duration on it? If people can outrun it since 200 ms is even slower than most heroes slowed 20%, it seems kind of.. iffy?

If you're going to give him an innate that buffs spell casting, give him lots of spells to cast, not fancy sword tricks. >>

Edit your original post, by the way.
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Mon Apr 12, 2010 3:21 am

I was checking to see if the fix would work before i changed the original post

And the point of the ult is that people can get out of it, if i made it faster, it would be op, cause it would chase down enemy heros and kill them
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:04 pm

Ok everyone, edited the main post with some new ideas, take a look.

Changed the innate, made it an autocast with a damage penalty.

Changed the sword to do knockback

Changed Speed to do an aoe instead of a multistrike

Added speed tot he ult and clarified how it works if it is no longer channeled
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Mon Apr 12, 2010 4:51 pm

hmm, i liked the old buff-on-spellcast on the innate. you can keep the degen tho.

so the new speed is like a toggleable cleave? that im ok with.

and gly, i think the innate would affect the swords bonus damage, daemonic blast, and the ult.
am i right?

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Mon Apr 12, 2010 5:06 pm

Yes, it would, The innate would affect anything that isnt damage or stat boosting related. XD
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Tue Apr 13, 2010 6:30 pm

thats what i thought.

i still stand by my statement XD

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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:34 pm

Well, If i make it a spell buff trigger, i need a spell that can be spamed for a not too crazy affect
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Grass Hopper on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:39 pm

your knocback? items? the speed skill?

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Post by Mortis on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:49 pm

Well, if i make the speed spell a non autocast spammable skill, id have to change it a bit, hold on
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Post by Grass Hopper on Tue Apr 13, 2010 8:50 pm

it doesnt haev to be spamable Razz

hes got 3 spells + potential items.

one of them seems to fit the 'spamable' catagory well enough (the blast)

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Post by Mortis on Tue Apr 13, 2010 9:06 pm

Ok...
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Glycine on Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:05 am

Mortis wrote:

Innate: I'm fine with the amount of bonus, but not the amount of times it can stack. Make it stack at most 5 times and change the bonus from movement speed to something else. I would also buff the bonus on the spells. You also left out the DPS value per stack. I remember it was 1/2/3/4/5/6 earlier, but we'll see if you need it.

Instead of passively increasing spell damage, make it the thing that stacks. If so you can stack it a lot.


Kharnagar, Demon Sword (Passive) Just numbers. We'll see.

Speed of the Warp: ( Toggle)
"Channeling the warp energies pouring into him from the claw in his chest, Quixo's speed flares up allowing him to place blows with unholy speed and accuracy"

Again, numbers.

Daemonic Blast: Increase the cooldown and the mana cost.

Ultimate:

The spell he attempted to cast is an incredibly taxing thing, Requiring the sacrifice of 30/40/50 % of his Max Hp.. Creates an Immobile tear in the fabric of the Materium, in a 500 Aoe, Which deals damage equal to the .5*hp sacrificed per second to all non allied heros/units in it's radius. Lasts for 5/6/7 Seconds.

Might be op, but who knows. Gotta do some mathcraft on it.
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Mortis on Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:08 am

Well Glyc, Firstly, the Blast started off as a higher cooldown, but was deliberately reduced to it's current level. Maybe i should definately buff the mana cost to something insane, but it was designed to be able to be cast at least once every ten seconds.

And for the innate, have it stack the buff for spell damage? Thats an interesting idea, maybe 5% per stack as well? Either way, it should work nicely that way, let me think of a way to do that.

Is the knock back on Kharnagar bad enough not to be taken off? its basicly a super bash
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Re: Quixos, Archtraitor, Radical Inquisitor

Post by Glycine on Wed Apr 14, 2010 12:53 am

The nearest similar skill to yours is Zoey's Psychic scream. Every 30 seconds, he can do 300 damage in an aoe similar to yours, and also slow for a %.

If you increase the cd to 10 seconds, it should be fine at its current values.

By the way, what's a 1 second 25 ms knockback? xD You knock them back 25 units? That isn't much distance.
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