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Post by 13loodRaven on Wed Sep 02, 2009 7:54 pm

Aiight then.

*El'Brukael* stats.
Str based.

Str:25 +2.7 per lvl.
Agi:23 +1.8 per lvl.
Int:14 +1.1 per lvl.

Base damage: 57-65.
Base armour: 4.

Story;
Born human in the Warp itself, El'Brukael was raised by terrors and Daemons that would have any being turned insane within a matter of moments, being born among these beings rendered El'Brukael immune to such horror.
Proving himself by breaking Khorne Beserker champions, with his uncanny ability to channel pain and suffering into an offensive fighting style, he earned himself a name, and a place in the Chaos forces.
He is now known as The Devourer, and has unnoficially taken the late Commanders place; the Inheritor.
Bringing his own pain to the battlefield, El'Brukael is a horror to face, and as many now know, incredebly painful to die by his hand.

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Post by 13loodRaven on Wed Sep 02, 2009 7:55 pm

Skills:
helped a little on the spaces
Skill one; The hero gains some sort of 'points' from being attacked/having spells cast on it. One attack = 1p, while a spell = 2p.
Each point deals 25dmg, and a .25 sec ministun.
1, can store up to 6p.
2, can store up to 8p.
3, can store up to 12p.
4, can store up to 16p.

Spell two, this should be a passive.
The hero gains more damage and takes less, this spell requires 'points'.
1, 10 dmg , blocks 15. Activates at 3p.
2, 20 dmg , blocks 20. Activates at 6p.
3, 30 dmg , blocks 25. Activates at 9p.
4, 40 dmg , blocks 30. Activates at 12p.
*Note* If the hero does'nt have enough for the higher leveled passive, it goes down to whatever level it has enough points to sustain.

Spell three,
(damage dealing, drains 'p'.)The hero makes a link to a target unit, dealing damage and gaining points.
1, Lasts 7 secs, drains 1p per sec, deals 45 dmg per sec.
2, lasts 10 secs, drains 1p per sec, deals 65 dmg per sec.
3, lasts 13 secs, drains 2p per sec, deals 95 dmg per sec.
4, lasts 16 secs, drains 2p per sec, deals 125 dmg per sec.
Note on the drain: Perhaps this hero should have a high base ms in order to keep up with fleeing heroes.

ULTIMATE: The hero targets a hero, causing it to relive the damage it had dealt to it in the past few seconds, and slow it. 20% slow that lasts for 6 secs.
1, Dmg in past 3 secs.
2, Dmg in past 4 secs.
3, Dmg in past 5 secs.

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Post by Glycine on Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:02 pm

Holy mother of the Emperor, spell three's absurd.

Let's do the mathcraft. Very Happy

125 * 16 = 2000 damage. At level 4. Meaning that at level 7, with a slow or stun, you do ridiculous amounts of damage. And even if it is channelling, that's crazy.

Lower the damage a tad. oo; Points are fine, though.
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Post by 13loodRaven on Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:04 pm

And his innate:
El'Brukael gains 2 str/agi/int for each 2p he has. Once he has reached his maximum 'p' now 30, he gains damage for each attack he has endured. 3 damage per attack, 4 for a spell. Damage bonus lasts for 15 seconds.

Note on spell 3;
1, lats 7 secs.
2, lasts 7 secs.
3, lasts 8 secs.
4, Lasts 8 secs.

Note on spell 1;
1, stores up to 15.
2, stores up to 20.
3, stores up to 25.
4, stores up to 30.
now deals 12 damage for each point. Its a nuke that removes points to cast the spell.

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Post by 13loodRaven on Wed Sep 02, 2009 8:05 pm

Omg most of the spells have to be remade, gimme a sec.

Spell two, this should be a passive.
The hero gains more damage and takes less, this spell requires 'points'.
1, 10 dmg , blocks 15. Activates at 6p.
2, 20 dmg , blocks 20. Activates at 12p.
3, 30 dmg , blocks 25. Activates at 18p.
4, 40 dmg , blocks 30. Activates at 24p.
*Note* If the hero does'nt have enough for the higher leveled passive, it goes down to whatever level it has enough points to sustain.

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Post by Glycine on Wed Sep 02, 2009 9:24 pm

Innate will need to be tweaked because he'll have +60 str, int, and agil if he just chooses to save up his points. You need to space it out, like he'll gain .25/.5/1/1.5/2 at max level.

No offense, ne, but he seems pretty boring *SORRY*. For a Chaos Possessed Berserker, I'd expect some bloody skills or a skill where he rushes in and flails about, destroying everything.

I do like your fluff though, it's imaginative.

You also need to elaborate on skill 1. Does the ministun still exist or is it a pure damage nuke?
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Sep 02, 2009 10:40 pm

ummm, the edit button is your friend Very Happy and i moved your old thread to the development forum btw... here.
just post in that thread, edit your original post with the story and stats

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Post by 13loodRaven on Thu Sep 03, 2009 1:58 am

Coulda told me that...

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Post by Grass Hopper on Thu Sep 03, 2009 12:48 pm

Grass Hopper wrote:moving to the dev forum

things i need to see before it gets an official stamp:
-update the first post with changes discussed here
-needs at least an attempt at stats
-preferably have a story
-(personal) i dont like the name Razz Khorne is the name of the blood god
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Post by 13loodRaven on Thu Sep 03, 2009 11:49 pm

Did it, its in the Dev forum now...

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