God Amongst Mortals

just waiting on a final decisino on the skillset before i move it to the dev

Updated OP

looks good needs a story.

some attempt at stats:
*str: 20 + 2.1
agi: 16 + 1.4
int: 20 + 2.6

The being that would become known as the Void Dragon is as old as the galaxy. Feeding upon stars in the aether, it wasn't until the Necrontyr discovered these star vampires that they became a force recognized throughout the galaxy. Granted necrodermis, mallable metal bodies, the beings who would become the C'tan crossed the starlight bridge and entered the materium. Malevolent by nature, the Necrontyr who had brought them into the world were their first victims. Encased in lifeless metal skeletons, the C'tan turned an entire species into subservient soldiers. Thanks to his affinity for all things technological, the Void Dragon led his nigh-invulnerable Necron forces in devestating campaigns against the Old Ones and their allies. After the war with the Old Ones and the Enslaver Plague, the Void Dragon entered his tomb on a small, backwater world to sleep until the galaxy was once more populated. As fate would have it this world turned out to be Terra. This world was Terra. Awoken from his millenia-long slumber, the weakened Void Dragon was bested in combat by the being who would become the Emperor of Mankind and re-entombed on Mars. After the Dark Age of Technology, the Void Dragon sent his thoughts to those humans who remained on Mars- teaching them how to build grand machines beyond their wildest imaginations. Thus the Mechanicum was born. With the Emperor's return to Mars, the Children of the Dragon were tasked to guard the Void Dragon's tomb in the Noctis Labyrinth- to make sure his influence spread no further. But the will of a god is strong, and no prison could contain the angry spirit of a C'tan forever...

edited your story, put the finished thing in quotes, and add it to your first post so i can see how it looks.

I like it.

Updated OP

damnit... still too long... u need to get rid of a line or two

How about now?

im hoping that fits XD i might have to trim it a bit more once i see how much doesnt fit on the tooltip

Hard to write a short history for something that's been around since the birth of the galaxy. LoL

yeah XD when the core description is anything longer than a decent paragraph it gets really hard to condense it

Let me know what you guys think...

We already have two black hole type skills, in Kharn's version of the Nightbringer. While I do like the skill itself and the concept, it's pointless to give two heroes of the same race the same ult.

Icons are spectacular, though.

Mine has been approved, Kharn's has not ... and Grass likes the skill better on this hero. Really don't want to start another 10 page discussion here like there is in the Nightbringer's thread. Other than that ... Thank you.

lmao yeah blackhole fits the dragon better than the nightbringer. (and we have two suggested skills that fit the nightbringer better in that thread)

and i liked the blue-y icons D:

edit: do u mind putting in links for those icons >.>

Trying a different set (See Above)

use the old blue-y skuill for dragons will, cause the (meepo... or kobold) looks bad
replace the necrodermis with the old will of the dragon (umm... weardragon? icon)

i can recolor the eclipse to match the color scheme... make them all similar color schemes

I like this setup

lol alot of faces

My eyes hurt from looking through so many icons.. I've settled on these. Change them up if you want, I'm done looking. LoL

Kharne just pointed it out in the channel, but if each Child takes 40% of the Dragon's damage, then with 4 they are taking 160%, or in other words, more than the Dragon would have received in the first place by a long shot.

ok fromu directed em towards it sooo

um all looks godd for a few things didnt someone say in nightbringer that dragon was known for eating stars? i could be wrong idk shit bout c'tans or necrons not my fluff lol

if so then would soemthing involving the eating of a star maybe be better if its false then disregard this

as for children is it 40% per so if i have 4 160% of damage (esentially all of it) gets redirected towards them if so it seems lil powerful so maybe like 20% flat out abosrbtion so with 1 its 10% 2 its 20% etc till u get your 4 and ur at a total of 40%
(again could be wrong just looks like u have it so each one absorbs 40% of damge)

the dps for mana is good but it needs 4 lvls dont u think so maybe 20/15/10/5 for .5/1/1.5/2 mana per sec?

meh jstu some thoughts

The C'tan used to eat stars ... all of them did. That's why they were called "Star Vampires", but after they got to the Materium they pretty much said "Fuck inanimate objects, we want sentient beings!". And I stand behind my theory that C'tan have to shed the Necrodermis to feed off a star. His ult doesn't have to do with eating a star, all he does is manipulate space around the location to create a gravitational well (essentially a black hole, but not from an imploded star).

Anyway ... Grass and I already talked about it when I first thought about adding the skill to the Children and it's supposed to be split between the 4, so if there were 4 they'd each take 10%.. I just forgot to post it when I did the edit.

ok haha