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Post by ZebioLizard on Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:59 am

Some idea's for some Imperial guard heroes! Who doesn't love these stoic guys.

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commisar:
names: Yarrick, Ibram Gaunt, Ciaphas Cain
story:
Commissars are invariably stern and uncompromising individuals, able to keep even the most anarchic regiments in line through fear, strength and power. Every regiment has one or more attached Commissars who remain with the regiment throughout its duties. Commissars are assigned to regiments by the Departmento Munitorum, which provides high-ranking commanders to Imperial Guard armies. They have authority over both the soldiers and regimental officers. Commissars have both the right and duty to immediately execute any Imperial guardsman or officer who shows cowardice or incompetence in battle. They must also ensure the regiment does not harbour the likes of Genestealer Cultists, Chaos heretics, spies, or mutants.

stats:
strength: 18 2.4 <-
agility: 15 2
intelligence: 20 2

attack range: melee
movement speed: 300

innate: Medalion Crimson
The medal awarded to soldiers who have suffered horrific injuries and not lost their will to fight. If the Commisar would recive a killing blow, he will be left with 1% of his hp instead. Costs 100 mana to block an killing blow. Toggleable skill.
cooldown: 3/2.5/2/1.5/1, manacost: 150/140/130/120/110/100

one: Bring up the Reserves!
The commissar calls in some reserves of guardsmen to man the front lines. Summons 4/6/8/10 guardsmen. Guardsmen have 100/175/250/325 hp, 1-3 2/4/6/8 piercing damage, 350 range, and 0 'normal' armor.
cooldown: 30/28/26/24 seconds, manacost: 150 mana.
mechanics: normal armor takes 50% less damage from heros and spells

two: Hold the Line!
The Commissar delivers an inspiring speech to nearby allies, giving them hope to keep fighting. Orders nearby creeps to hold position and gives nearby allies 2/3/4/5 bonus armor, 4/5/6/7 bonus regen, and 10/15/20/25 damage. Damage last only as long as the Hold Position order is held.
coldown: 25 seconds, duration: 15 seconds, manacost: 70/85/100/115

three: Summary Execution
Cowardice is punished by death, deserters will be shot! Whenever the commisar kills an allied creep, all nearby creeps gain 10/20/30/40% attack speed, and 3/5/7/9% movement speed. If he kills allied hero, it gives double the bonus to all nearby allies. Can be activated to instantly kill a target guardsmen.
manacost: 50, cooldown: 75
notes: this is passive!!! all units are deny-able when they are at less than 150 hp

ult: Bring the Thunder!
The Commissar singles the reserve basilisks to fire upon the target location, bombarding the area with earthshaker rounds. One round will strike the target location every .55 - 1.2 seconds, dealing 100/150/200 damage in a 250 aoe, and knocking back all units. lasts 10/14/18 seconds.
Cooldown: 110, manacost: 250/300/350, aoe: 750, cast range: 1000
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Commissar:
General
Quote: When you need something to keep the morale up of the imperium of man, you put something more frightening behind them against the beasts and daemons and heratics, The commissar is that frightening BEAST.

Main stat: Str
Secondary stat: Int
Weakest stat: Agi (Keeping proper position of those hats takes away much of their agility!)

Innate: GET CLOSER, I WANT TO HIT THEM WITH MY BLADE!: The commissar's adventurous spirit is awakened! As he calls for a chimera to pick him up: A chimera comes and picks up the commissar, it can also pickup nearby allied heros as well.. But the chimera isn't that well built for some strange reason, and collapses a bit after being summoned.

Skill 1: Guardsman: The commissar calls upon some reinforcements of guardsman to back him up, and man the front lines.. Afterall, the guardsman have RESERVES!: Calls a good several or so guardsman to fight.

Skill 2: Artillary fire, GO!: Calling upon the basilisks of the emperium of man. He has them fire several normal rounds into the enemy forces, but being inaccurate, it doesn't always account for friendly fire!: Several seconds after casting, large artillery blasts start striking the area in very random places, knockbacking anyone it hits directly, and dealing full damage to enemies, but also half damage to allies.

Skill 3: GET IN LINE MAGGOTS!: The imperial commissar see's someone fleeing from the scene of battle, making an example of him, he kills him on the spot, inspiring the rest of the troops to fight harder!...And to hopefully live to see another day: Kills a unit, giving nearby units (not heroes) a boost to their attack speed and movement speed.

Skill 4: Ultimate (Unsure)

Whoops..put this in the wrong forum.
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Apr 29, 2009 4:49 pm

good idea, change the name to maby commisar yarrick (check my post in ur chaos sorcerer thread) and make the inate a normal skill, or maby his ult... and think of a new innate... something less big

and ill move this to suggestions for you Razz

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Post by Azurose on Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:04 pm

Why not Igram Gaunt as a commisar?

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Post by ZebioLizard on Wed Apr 29, 2009 6:35 pm

Hm...His innate could be Stand the line!:

Which Gives a boost to hp to every normal unit nearby. like...

+25 hp?, and gives them 1 armor.

Or heals them by a certain amount,
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Apr 29, 2009 7:09 pm

stand the line could be like a roar skill? adds armror and dmg? adding hp is too troublesome to code Razz

and either gaunt or yarrick works for me Razz long as hes named

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Post by ZebioLizard on Wed Apr 29, 2009 8:07 pm

Actually, maybe more of a life regen + defense skill. Since it's holding the line afterall Razz.
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Apr 29, 2009 8:10 pm

does roar add regen? >.>

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Post by ZebioLizard on Wed Apr 29, 2009 8:17 pm

No but there's a scroll effect that has a roar like effect while giving a small life regen Razz
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Post by Azurose on Wed Apr 29, 2009 9:02 pm

what about an into the breach shout or aura of sorts

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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Apr 29, 2009 10:21 pm

i like hold the line, a new theme for a summon hero Razz the other one has only offensive stuff really...

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Post by elttatg on Thu May 28, 2009 3:08 pm

I'd like to see summary execution. Kills a creep to heal units around him and boost their damage

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Post by Grass Hopper on Thu May 28, 2009 4:39 pm

Skill 3: GET IN LINE MAGGOTS!: The imperial commissar see's someone fleeing from the scene of battle, making an example of him, he kills him on the spot, inspiring the rest of the troops to fight harder!...And to hopefully live to see another day: Kills a unit, giving nearby units (not heroes) a boost to their attack speed and movement speed.

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Post by elttatg on Thu May 28, 2009 10:36 pm

LOL completely did not see that. I was somehow under the impression that it was the equivalent of close order drill...which actually wouldnt be a bad skill. Friendly units that are within 100 of commisar or a unit affected by this skill get increased damage and hitpoint regen. Perhaps artillery fire could become an ult...

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Post by Grass Hopper on Thu May 28, 2009 10:38 pm

not a bad idea thx Very Happy

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Post by mr_vespa on Fri May 29, 2009 7:13 pm

Hmm... As for commissariat quotes:

- IF YOU WILL NOT SERVE ON THE BATTLEFIELD, THEN YOU WILL SERVE ON THE FIRING LINE!
- GLORY TO THE FIRST MAN TO DIE! CHARGE!

And, I can't really not post here without putting a few suggestions of my own Very Happy. Here goes:

Imperial Commissar (Yarrick, Gaunt, Ciaphas Cain... whichever suits your tastes Razz)

Innate: Aura of Discipline --> Commissars inspire their men to feats rivaling that of the mighty Space Marines, however drastic their measures. Friendly units and heroes with X of the Commissar receive a Y% increase in health and mana regeneration.

Forward you dogs to victory! --> The Commissar unleashes a passionate oratory, inspiring his allies to fight harder for the sake of the Imperium. The Commissar and nearby friendly units and heroes recieved a Y% increase in movement speed and bonus armor for Z seconds.

Refractor Field --> Some Commissars are outfitted with these intricate devices, protecting them from hostile environments. Refractor Field increases the Commissar's armor by X and Magic Resistance Y%.
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Post by Grass Hopper on Fri Jul 17, 2009 12:34 am

bumping this so i dont forget about it...

much to zebio's disappointment... im prolly gona do a mix of whats in this thread for his hero Razz

ill think more on it inna bit

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Post by Betrayer_kharn on Wed Jul 22, 2009 9:29 pm

-Commisar's "Inspiration"
Desription- Imperial guards are known for sacrificing
the guardsmen that cannot do their job efficiently to
inspire the others around him
*innate effect- Ibram sacrifices target unit causing
every allied unit in 700 aoe to gain 10/20/30/40/50% damage
and 1/2/3/4/5 armor for 10/10/12/12/14 seconds.

-Camo-Cloak
Desription- Ibram's cloak is made out of special material
that greatly increases his cover
*Effect- when activated ibram gaines 10/15/20/25% evasion
for 4/6/8/10 seconds

-Sword of Heironymo
Description- A powerful blade gifted to ibram for his
valiant efforts at the battle for the city of vervunhive
*Effect- Ibram gets 2/2/4/5 dmg for every allied unit in
a 550 aoe and a 2/5/7/10% per kill to gain 0.75/1/1.25/1.5 str

-Leader
Desription- Ibram always leads his assaults at the very
front and rallies his men to his side
*Effect- ibram summons 2/4/6/8 guardsmen to his side
each has 350 range 175 health 0 armor and does 15-18 damage

-Artillery barrage
Desription- Being at the fron-lines ibram has the
ability to call in an artillery bombardment on a certain area
*Ultimate Effect- ibram orders artillery to fire 5/10/15
shells that land in random places in a 700 aoe each shell does
125/150/175 damage and then 40/60/80 aoe these shells dont know
enemy from foe and damage everything they hit
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:23 pm

and on this im gonna combine a bunch of diff suggestions from diff people into a comisar... or two... dunno yet

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Post by Betrayer_kharn on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:28 pm

glad i gave u inspiration lol :-P
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:29 pm

yeah, i have one complete skillset from zebio, 1 from you, and enough ideas for almost another entire skillset from other people

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Post by Betrayer_kharn on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:38 pm

good haha so 1 hero has lead to the development of 3 possible heroes =]
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:40 pm

well, i dont wanna have 3 commisars Razz

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Post by Betrayer_kharn on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:44 pm

well u dont haev to make em commisars lol jsut can use some of same skills lol tht summon can be for any1 all ig mass haha :-P or the dmg buff for each ally nearby
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Post by Grass Hopper on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:45 pm

well, the ideas come up only fit the commisar theme Razz

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Post by Betrayer_kharn on Wed Jul 22, 2009 10:48 pm

haha ehhhh :-P
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