Sigismund: Emperor's Champion

"Sigismund, First Company Captain of the Imperial Fists, was chosen, on the eve of the Battle for Terra, to become the Emperor's chosen champion. A legendary warrior in his own right, he was given the greatest armour and arms available, donning the legendary Armour of Faith and grasping the first Black Sword. He went forward to challenge the traitorous leaders to single combat, and triumphed over all he met in battle. One of the mightiest warriors of the age, after the heresy, when the legions were divided into chapters, he went forth to command the Black Templars as their first High Marshall. "

"The Armour of Faith is a Power armour crafted by the most skilled Techpriests, anointed with holy oils by servitors and with catechisms of hate written on it to protect it's wearer from any harm that may prevent him from fulfilling his duty. " 10/15/20/25/3015/18/21/24/27/30% chance to become invincible for 2 seconds
CD: 20/25/30/35/4020/18/16/14/12/10

"His hate for the enemies of the imperium has no boundaries, plowing through the enemy like a knife through paperbutter." Charges straight into the enemy for 300/400/500/600 range, stunning units all enemies hit for .65/1/1.25/1.5s.5/.75./1/1.25 seconds, knocking them away slightly, and dealing 40/80/120/160 damage to all enemies hit, but also damaging the champion for 75/50/2550/40/30/20% of damage done.

"Sigismund grasps his sword in 2 hands, making each swing much stronger, but leaving him more open to attacks." Increases attack damage by 10/20/30/40%, but decreases armour by 2/4/6/8.

"An imposing figure on the battlefield, the Emperor's Champion puts fear into even the most hardened of veterans." Decreases the armour of the enemy nearby enemies by 2/3/4/5 and has a 17% chance to root an enemy on hit for 1.5/2.25/3/3.75 1.5/2/2.5/3 seconds.

"The Emperor's Champion sends forth a mighty challenge to his enemy, forcing him to respond by attacking him with his futile attempts at resistance." Forces selected enemy to attack him for 4/5/6 seconds. First next attack on enemy the target does 100/200/300 damage, with giving the champion getting getting a 20/30/40% increase to attack speed until effect is done.

Grass: ive added some comments, gone OCD on your format, and given some suggestions for number changes... look it over, change what u like, toss what u dont. it is your hero afterall just keep what ive said in mind.

Glycine wrote:Hum.

Things I noticed:

Give the innate a scale. 1/2/4/6/8/10% might work?

Sounds good

Black Sword decreases armor by 10% for all levels or does it need a scale as well?

Nah, I felt that if it decreased armour by 40% at level 4, that would be too much.

Fear Incarnate needs a really really low chance to proc. 6 second stun and -8 armor crash is really, really good on a melee hero.

I was planning on 5% with each level with maybe a cooldown.

Ult is very nice, though.

Glad you like it

Everything looks really, really good. He needs Stats, so he'll probably be a str based hero. He also needs movespeed (Moderate amount).

Will do.

There, as with all new heroes,will inevitably be balance issues in the versions to come, but that's ok. 65% extra attack during the ult could be a little much, but hey, that's why we play test.

GhostIV wrote:But mine is the best one obviously. It should take priority. =p

DeusMechanicus wrote:

GhostIV wrote:But mine is the best one obviously. It should take priority. =p

I vote he adds the FLayed One before this .. ?

GhostIV wrote:Wrong they are not the coolest thing in the WH40k Universe....they're the coolest think in the entire universe.(even I can't argue with they're coolness =p)

Fromundaman wrote:Haha, I understand that. The problem is, that's impossible, since a hero's perfection is based on how balanced they are compared to other heroes, meaning that until every hero is completely balanced 100% (pretty much impossible), no hero can be perfect.

Eh, I can try though right? =p

That being said, just saw the changes you made:

-Does Furious Charge stun? The reason I ask is because it seems weak damage-wise, and you take damage for it (how much btw), so I was wondering if there's an effect on it.

Yes it does stun, just forgot to add how long it stuns. Also, not sure how much he should get damaged, any suggestions?

-1st attack Crit'ing can work, but that crit is way too high. 4x crit late game means that he can do easily over 1k in one hit, then they still can't run and he has increased attack speed to finish them. Seems like an auto-kill move to me.

Ya, your right. Does 3x work? or should I do even lower? Also, I added a range, because I forgot to mention that the timer starts after the enemy in question begins to move towards you.